PAE Professional Academic English
Week 05 · Assessment

Presentation
One.

Your topic proposal, on its feet. Then: who you're really talking to, and how to sharpen a topic into an objective.

Matthew Clement · Careercomms.comClass 1, Presentations  ·  Class 2, Audience & topic
PAE Professional Academic EnglishWeek 05 · Where we left off
Recap · Week 04

Last week, in brief.

  • The slide serves the audience, keywords, ≤7 lines, 2 to 4 colours.
  • CRAP: Contrast, Repetition, Alignment, Proximity.
  • Describe a figure in four moves: Introduce, Explain, Emphasise, Discuss.
You arrive with

Presentation 1 ready, hook, thesis, structure, one described visual.

Today

You deliver it. Then we turn from research toward writing.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishWeek 05 · Agenda

This week.

Class 1 · Presentation 1
  • Run of show & timing
  • What you're graded on
  • Deliver your topic proposal
  • Give structured peer feedback
Class 2 · Audience & topic
  • Who is your real audience?
  • Tailoring the message
  • From topic to research objective
  • Self-reflection on your delivery
Reading

Workbook Ch 2 to 3, Knowing your audience (pp. 12 to 14) and narrowing a topic into an objective (pp. 15 to 17).

PAE Professional Academic EnglishPresentation 1 · run of show

How today runs.

0:00Setup & order drawn, have your slides loaded and ready5 min
0:05Presentations, 3 to 4 minutes each, in drawn orderper speaker
+1 minTwo questions from the audience after each talkQ&A
endPeer feedback forms collected · brief debrief5 min
Timing

Going long is a grading criterion, not a small thing. Practise to 3:30 so a nervous pace still lands inside four minutes.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishWhat you're graded on · 10%

Four things I'm listening for.

Content

A clear topic, a defensible position, a sense of why it matters.

Structure

Hook, thesis, preview, body, close, in that order, signposted.

Delivery

Eye contact, vocal variety, posture, pace. No reading.

Visuals

Clean slides, one well-described figure, cited sources.

This is a proposal, you're convincing us the topic is worth your semester. You don't need final answers yet.

Before you stand up

Hook. Thesis.
Preview. Evidence. Close.

Five beats, in order. Open by earning attention, end on a line you chose on purpose. Breathe before the first word.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishWhile you watch

You're an audience with a job.

A student presenting to an audience

Over to you.

Presentations begin. Speakers in drawn order, eyes up, breathe, and trust the hours you put in.

Presentation 1 · 10% of final grade3 to 4 minutes each
Class 2 · Chapter 2

Who are you
really talking to?

Every choice, vocabulary, evidence, examples, answers to one question: who is listening, and what do they already know?

Workbook · Chapter 02Pages 12 to 14
PAE Professional Academic EnglishAudience analysis

Three questions before you write a word.

Who

Classmates and a professor across many majors, not specialists in your field.

Know

General academic background. They will not know your field's jargon or its debates.

Need

A reason to care, defined terms, and a clear line from evidence to claim.

The expert's trap

You know your topic too well. What feels obvious to you is new to them. Define one term they'd stumble on, every time.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishTailoring the message

Same finding, two audiences.

 A specialist audienceA general academic audience
VocabularyField terms, unexplained.Plain language; define on first use.
EvidenceMethod & statistics in detail.The headline number, well framed.
ExamplesEdge cases & nuance.One vivid, relatable case.

For this course, write for the general academic column. It is harder, and a better skill.

Talk about it · 5 minutes

Explain your topic to the person beside you, who is not in your major, in thirty seconds.

  •   Which term did you have to stop and define?
  •   What did they find interesting that you thought was obvious?
  •   What would you cut for a general academic room?
Class 2 · Chapter 3

From a topic to
an objective.

A topic is what you're looking at. An objective is what you intend to find out about it, and it's what makes research possible.

Workbook · Chapter 03Pages 15 to 17
PAE Professional Academic EnglishSharpening

A research objective does three things.

01 · Names a scope

A bounded slice you can actually cover, not “AI,” but “AI in Korean radiology.”

02 · Poses a question

Something a reasonable person could answer differently. Tension lives here.

03 · Implies a method

It hints at the evidence you'll need to settle it.

Test

If you can't say what evidence would change your mind, you have a topic, not an objective.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishWorked, by track

Topic → objective.

TrackTopicResearch objective
STEMSemiconductorsDetermine whether Korea's chip lead rests on policy or on private R&D investment.
HASSThe Korean WaveAssess how far Hallyu functions as deliberate state soft-power rather than market success.
BIZE-commerceEvaluate whether Coupang's logistics, not its pricing, reset consumer expectations.
Talk it out
  • Which of these objectives is closest to yours, and what single piece of evidence would change your mind?
PAE Professional Academic EnglishHomework · Writing Journal
REFLECT 5.1

After Presentation 1

Journal · ½ page

Honest reflection is graded for thought, not for self-criticism. Answer in your Writing Journal:

  1. What worked in your delivery, and how do you know?
  2. Where did you lose the audience, and why?
  3. One concrete thing you'll change for the final presentation.
Use the evidence

Re-read your peers' feedback forms before you write. Patterns across three readers are worth more than your own memory.

PAE Professional Academic EnglishBefore next week

Homework & what's next.

Do this week
  • Write your Presentation 1 self-reflection
  • Turn your topic into a one-sentence objective
  • Re-read Workbook Ch 1 & 7 before the writing unit
Next week · Week 6

Into the writing. Essay types in depth and developing your thesis, the spine of the paragraph (Wk 8) and the essay (Wk 11).

PAE Professional Academic EnglishWeek 05 · Recap

This week in one slide.

  • Presentation 1 delivered, proposal, not final answers
  • Graded on content, structure, delivery, visuals
  • Write for a general academic audience
  • Define the term they'd stumble on
  • A topic names a thing; an objective asks a question
  • Reflect using your peers' evidence

Now, the writing.

Week 05 · Next, Essay Types & Thesis Development